I love it. As a person who read a ton, i enjoyed it! I do have a comment, something to keep in mind... Have you read cussler or mitchner?? Only book I have started & never finish, ALASKA. Why? the descriptive verb lashing was brutal!!!!! 5 freaking pages about how the water looked. Omg. Kill myself. You definitely did not do this, you were perfect. Not too much or too little. I guess I don't want you to go over the edge :) Please don't hit me!! I love you I love you I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It is always possible that I can go over the edge... I have to edit, re-edit, and edit some more when writing due to exactly what you've described. Thanks for your encouragement, and I will keep in mind you Love me!! heehee
I love it. As a person who read a ton, i enjoyed it! I do have a comment, something to keep in mind... Have you read cussler or mitchner?? Only book I have started & never finish, ALASKA. Why? the descriptive verb lashing was brutal!!!!! 5 freaking pages about how the water looked. Omg. Kill myself. You definitely did not do this, you were perfect. Not too much or too little. I guess I don't want you to go over the edge :) Please don't hit me!! I love you I love you I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteIt is always possible that I can go over the edge... I have to edit, re-edit, and edit some more when writing due to exactly what you've described. Thanks for your encouragement, and I will keep in mind you Love me!! heehee
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